I printed out a new copy of the draft because I'm so old-fashioned that hard copy is still how I see the whole.
I think the idea would be to end this post and go do all the things I wrote in parentheticals, starting with the moves to earlier and later. Clearly, I'm not ready to make any decisions on the story's opening yet, despite my bracketed comments there. I need the shape and the ending before I can finalize the beginning, decide if it opens with this or with that.
Frog Out, off to move chunks of text
(No word from Florida yet this morning. I think they're sleeping in.)